:::::一首酸溜溜的情歌:::::

SONG OF MAY

 

Comes from the blue Jay---

for him, the wounded sky no longer gray

~ ~ ~

Upon the soft pillows of hay

Spring Lovers lay---

your perfect feathers dance

in the everlasting ray

 

O, 我的小妹

Come away

Come away!

Never too late

to learn how

to fly!

 

O, 我的小妹

五月的你－－

嗓音如此迷人

歌声那样

娇美！

作舟'06

[z.f.]

YY: never think so . . .otherwise, that popular poem will become a pop song. . . as we said before, a reader is like a mirror, reflecting whatever he/she can catch or understand, but can be enlightened . . . reading sometimes is assuming . . .

读诗的人本来就不多，认真读的就更不多，"所有读者"，其实也没多少:))

那好吧，我以后就当每首诗歌都是写给“我”的来读:)这样可能能读得更深透些? 谢谢YY指教。。。晚安。。。

[影云]

zf:诗歌是写给所有读者的

never think so . . .otherwise, that popular poem will become a pop song. . . as we said before, a reader is like a mirror, reflecting whatever he/she can catch or understand, but can be enlightened . . . reading sometimes is assuming . . .

[影云]

诗歌里的可以包容的声音很多；就象ANNA SWIR的诗歌，难以以“辉煌的大框框”来
分类，如果用“爱”来回答，就不“准确”。。。所以，我不以为“爱”是诗歌的
唯一主题。。。

[z.f.]

YY，确实，你说的没错，“妹妹找哥泪花儿流”是用的引号:)
另外真实情感，嫉妒，恐惧，无病呻吟，丧心病狂都可以叫人类的真实情感，我们说的诗里歌里的不酸应该是爱吧。。。比如山歌里哥呀妹呀的爱，诗歌里的爱。。。
关于爱，诗人最有发言权！！你们说了算。。。诗歌是写给所有读者的，读者只是在诗歌里读爱感受爱，除非是个人情书，读者就感受不到了。。。
if i sing
like that
bird in the tree
i can learn
something new
about love
each day
. . .

[影云]

妹妹找哥泪花儿流：
酸？不会吧！

真实的情感，譬如山歌，那哥呀，妹呀，唱的，很纯呀。。。

酸，来自无病呻吟。。。

[未夕]

"周末有好酒" 将进酒，杯莫停！:)

[作舟诗集]

各位周末好!

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水滴, 我的"情歌"和"卡拉OK"相比是忽悠了点儿:)) 否则,不就真成了“妹妹找哥泪花儿流”了么???

WX,周末有好酒别忘了作舟哟!! :))

[未夕]

唱山歌罗喂 。。。好听！

水滴："I hate the new format" too. it doesn't support html. no songs and pictures for a while in comment area :(

[by水滴]

is there a "song", or just 忽悠？ :)

btw: I hate the new format. very much feel lost!

[作舟诗集]

有“妹妹找哥泪花儿流”溜溜酸么??? :)
haha....!!
thanx!!

[z.f.]

酸溜溜??? 有“妹妹找哥泪花儿流”溜溜酸么??? :)

很好听，还是挺诗意的情歌呢，谢谢分享！！！

[作舟诗集]

没"倒牙"就好了:))
与大伙儿同乐!!!

[y.y.]

呀呀呀，嘿/喂/妹/媚/美。。。好好听的歌！

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